All Comments on 'Pizza Night with Double Sausage'

Good story; gets right to the point, which I like! But it seriously lacks proofreading. Just a few minutes' more work and the dozen or so grammatical errors could be eliminated. BTW, the possessive form of"it" is "its", not "it's". The apostrophe is only used to form a contraction for "it is".

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