All Comments on 'Placement Office: Swimming Lesson'

sounds like his mentor was mom.when will we get the story of why his dad has treated him like crap?

sorry, guys, I didn't realize until just now that I did all that typing and Kit didn't even get laid

BRAVO! MORE please!

I very much liked the way they like playing with and learning from each other.

a housekeeping suggestion, I read the publish dates to see which story to read next, it would help if you some how signaled the sequence if not using chapters. even though this story was second sequentially it was third alphabetically. It could be confusing to some of your readers.