All Comments on 'Placement Office: Swimming Lesson'

by RioRedKing

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rightbankrightbankalmost 10 years ago
very romantic

I very much liked the way they like playing with and learning from each other.

a housekeeping suggestion, I read the publish dates to see which story to read next, it would help if you some how signaled the sequence if not using chapters. even though this story was second sequentially it was third alphabetically. It could be confusing to some of your readers.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Bravo! MORE please!

BRAVO! MORE please!

RioRedKingRioRedKingabout 10 years agoAuthor
uh-oh

sorry, guys, I didn't realize until just now that I did all that typing and Kit didn't even get laid

redlion75redlion75about 10 years ago

sounds like his mentor was mom.when will we get the story of why his dad has treated him like crap?

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