All Comments on 'Planetary Indigestion'

by cowboy109

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Dumb

You need serious help with editing. Improper verbage tenses and misspelling ruined what otherwise was a very idiotic story. I love anal stories but this missed the mark by miles.

1 star

DragonRider55

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
beulahthebrit

I have read some shit in my time, but this is at a totally new level. Sorry a story about shit, that is total shit.

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