All Comments on 'Plato's Retreat Ripples Ch. 04'

I just read all four of your episodes, one right after the other. They're all 5's in my book. Looking forward to #5, hopefully telling the story of when the quartet goes back to Plato's Retreat and spreads their love around.

Sexy and engaging, well written story! I could just picture the girls sharing Mac’s cock and cum with their mouth and tongues, really hot. Five * tale.

Excellent all around: writing, plot advancement, character development. Great series, look forward to more!

Great chapter, love this story! First rate writing, sex and characters!

I can relate but luv for someone to discuss/ recall the southern version of Plato’s Retreat called Plato’s Repeat!

Excellent writing and erotic chapter in a first rate series

First rate chapter in this imaginative and erotic story. I've enjoyed all the chapters so far; you've captured a great mix of dialog, plot, and sex, with feelings and interest. The character development has been natural and realistic, the imagery strong and vivid, and the writing top-notch. Love to read more!

Hot, hot, story, with great characters, great writing, and great sex! 5* across the board. Setup for so many more sexcapades: public/risky, experimenting--maybe a return to Platos?. I appreciate your imagination and style.

Mmm, can’t get the image out of my mind of Sadie & Tara, sitting with their naked pussies on display to each other, just bottomless. I get hard just thinking about it. This is a great story, and I am loving the journey from curiosity to outright hedonism.

One of the best writers here, makes me glad my phone is light enough to hold up with one hand!

Great story, so erotic, sexy, and natural. Just enough sexual description to vividly imagine the action but leaving room to fill in own images. Excellent all around, cant' wait for more!

Hot, Hot, Hot. More please!

Love this series; sexy, natural, interesting characters and story. 5 stars.

Excellent writing, great addition to the story!

Loved the characters.

Excellent writing, some incredibly sexy and erotic scenes. I think, however, the dialogue about Public sex/exhibitionism after the four-way sex scene sounds more like the introduction to another chapter. This chapter might have been stronger if it wrapped up sooner, but that is a minor thought, and not enough to deduct from a superb five star rating. Looking forward to Moore here!

This is a fabulous series, can't wait for the next chapter. Hope it cums soon!

Mmm, please continue this story; so hot, engaging, and well written. What will happen, how far do they go, do they go back to Plato's? More, please.