All Comments on 'Playdate'

I didn’t know what I was looking for but this was exactly it. Please write more.

this was by far one of the best pieces of erotica i’ve ever read. i love it when there’s BDSM between two people who love and respect each other instead of the total stranger thing. please please write more. and thank you for this!

great loving bdsm. hot! could see this as part of a larger story with more character development, this being one chapter. i know that is difficult, but just saying...

Thanks guys.

I loved it! I would love to read more on these characters!

Absolutely LOVED it! The mutual love & respect was awesome! Thank YOU!

The thing that doesn’t sit well with me has nothing to do with the sex. They were both on an emotional rollercoaster for days after her outburst because they didn’t communicate. My husband and I are lucky in that we rarely argue with each other but when we do we are quick to apologise and resolve the issue. We NEVER ignore the person trying to apologise and arguments and uncertainty is not strung out over days.

Ironically communication is usually better in a d/s relationship possibly because emotions seem to be more intense?

She mentioned slipping into her role, but it looks like they have a 24/7 lifestyle and as far as that goes he comes across as emotionally detached. Maybe I’m reading between the lines or maybe I’m letting the ‘birthday surprise’ story influence my response.

I think sometimes in a relationship with children it’s important to do a reset when you stop making the relationship and sex a priority and sometimes it’s OK to take to cool off period if both parties are upset. But I would consider this in the rewrite.