All Comments on 'Playing with Dildo's and Enjoying'

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AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I'm aware there are people who are hopeless at spelling and grammar - yet still feel the urge to write. Sometimes they own up and apologise in advance. Their main theme is usually 'I can't help it - live with it or move on.'

I prefer correct spelling and grammar.

This title and description starts with two dildo's which should not have an apostrophe, and Acouple which should be two words. Then ... 'Marilyn looked up at her boyfriend with an enthusiastic grin on her lips'. The sentence should have ended with the word grin. A grin can only occur on the lips.

So I abandoned it. 'I can't help it - live with it.' Surely even the most illiterate of writers can put an 's' on the end of a word to form a plural. I gave it one star for your sheer carelessness.

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