by jadedSHADOW
Enjoyed the idea. Heck, I always like your stories. I do wish you would make them a bit longer. :)
I HATE stories that end with "To be continued" or in some other way
indicate, at the end, that this is only the first chapter without
informing the readers of this important fact BEFORE they open the fucking
thing. I hate it so much that, after years of putting up with this shit, I
decided that all such stories get an automatic rating of one (1).
Since it is obvious that you don't give a fuck about the readers nor
your own story, you have no right to be pissed about this.