All Comments on 'Pleasant Nightmares Pt. 03'

I adored this. I loved the introduction of the female demon and having her empty herself by pissing herself was masterful. Thank you for continuing.

@slider7373 - Appreciate the positive feedback! Glad you liked it. I got the idea from the female demon primarily from your comment on the previous part, so maybe you deserve some credit for this one. Heh. Since you seem to be an avid reader of my creations; If there's something else you'd like to see me write, please send me a PM with your requests. Cheers!

Awesome story. Thanks!

Fantastic, I was waiting for Cara to bring her new found addiction into the real world.

Now I’m thinking, how is she going to reach that dream level of depravity for real? I don’t think she’s bold enough to completely let go yet, but pissing her bed every evening and drinking her own won’t be enough for long.

Maybe with some encouragement from her demons, she will grow bolder and bolder. Perhaps she finds her brothers/dads piss bottles when going home for the holidays? Or clogs a urinal at school for an after hours snack? Or drugs her roommate to get to the source?

Interested to see how and where you take her.

@Anonymous - I am still actively putting out new stories on the website on a weekly basis, but this particular story is currently on the backburner. I actually wrote part 4 in an obscure sort of way for the Halloween competition, though it never made it to a publishing-worthy state. It was set following two completely different characters that got lured into a trap in order to summon a demon into the real world. Clara was the 'mastermind' behind this ordeal. But it made her into such a villain that I didn't end up posting it, and she was certainly more of a side character as well. So let's consider that non-canon for the time being!