All Comments on 'Please Come Over for a Coffee'

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jl162001jl162001over 2 years ago

Neat tight story but where is the intercourse?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It was good

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

if she was as horny as she said she was they would have fucked instead of just having oral sex

Xyzz90212Xyzz90212over 2 years agoAuthor

To those who wished they'd done the deed ... I'm sure they wish they had too. But, it was one of my first stories, and I guess I wasn't ready to take them to home base. Let your imagination run wild. Maybe they get together again for some wild abandon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I like that they stopped short. It was as if they wanted to cheat but not to cross a line - yet.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I need a neighbor like him!!!!!

Xyzz90212Xyzz90212over 2 years agoAuthor

Well hey ... Maybe I am him. LOL.

4certain4certainabout 2 years ago

Great story, is part 2 in the works? I'd like to have a neighbor like her to share a coffee

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This was a very weak story, you should have worked on it more.

Xyzz90212Xyzz90212over 1 year agoAuthor

Gosh … thanks for that feedback.

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