All Comments on 'Please, Do It For Us'

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zooliciouszooliciousover 2 years ago

So many places to take this story. Keep writing for our joy as well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good premise.

Sex is too automatic. No explanation about why the girls felt sure that sex would be welcomed. Did something happen before?

Three stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Forget that A hole. That was fantastic and should continue. Keep up the shy tension and it will be hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

He has a dick and no significant other. He'll yes he'll be receptive to sex. This is a smokin hot premise. Darn straight he should get together with these women again and soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

PART 2 PLEASE!!

naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4uover 2 years ago

Naughty girls, I sense there could be more

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