All Comments on 'Please Sir'

If you liked this story please give Redemption a read also. Also featuring Anthony Van Der Beck. I’m aiming to pull this together into a broader story/novel.

I’m very new to this but thoroughly enjoying writing and receiving feedback so all welcome.

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The use of quotation marks does not preclude the use of other punctuation. Please review writing basics like periods and commas. Ellipses are not periods and are not used nearly as often as you think they are.

This stuff reads more like straight up abuse than dom/sub relationships. Not enjoyable.

Rape is rape.

The help isn't there for you to take, even with your fancy sports car.

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