by Farleven
Fantastic, awesome, wonderful honestly one of the best stories I have ever read I cried I really did thank you for imagining and writing it and hears to a future filled with more wonderful tails and adventures god bless and keep you always and forever
Really enjoyed this entire series and can see a follow up as Max pledges.
One editorial comment, I think if you were to expand each chapter beyond just the completion of the challenges, some you could build this wonderful story into a novella and possibly a novel that would be very worth reading...
Your story was very thought provoking, made me wish it was that easy to transition, but alas it is not x
From the first chapter, I felt like Alison would stay a female. It was well done though and you wrapped it up nicely.
Excellent ending, and glad that you had Allison do it for herself, rather than Max (though that did count as well), and that Max made that acknowledgment to.
Like Shelby noted below, I really enjoyed the entire series. Waiting to see what you do next. Keep it up. You've kept me up!
Good fantasy ride. Your story struggled a bit at the beginning but once you got past the “Magic” part it took on the new life I think you were trying for. You kept it light hearted and emotionally confusing, which I found to be the best part of your storyline. Good characters and character development throughout. First 5 ***** I have awarded, and I think you earned each one.
I would normally have so many things to bring up but why bother at this point? You have written a well thought out story that managed to deeply affect me emotionally and I know that I would just become a huge mess again if I got into everything I loved about this incredibly beautiful tale. I was hoping once I started getting into chapter one that it might help me to answer some questions but sadly I think I actually ended up with even more things to consider and ended up being a soggy snot factory during the process. While it is very messy, it also is quite cathartic so thank you for that as well as giving me a story I can always go back to when I have too many extra boxes of Kleenex cluttering up my closets and tables. This was a real gem and a truly rare one at that as far as I’m concerned.
Be well and stay safe.
J.D.
I positively loved this story! Oh how I wish this could have happened to me in college. I would have totally made the same choice! Thank you for writing this story. It’s such a dream to read.
I loved it...!!I'd love to meet girl like Allison. Thank you for sharing your story...!! (smiling)
I love every part. And cried this whole chapter. It really was a great story.
Sexy. Erotic. Tender. Loving. Just a wonderful story. Thank you for writing it.
I love this story, and I'm so happy for Alison and Max. I would love to read an epilog if you ever write it. Thank you for sharing this.
I love this story. The world would be a better place if we all could experience both sides.
As a trans woman who to my surprise acutally switched teams after my surgrey. This story made me cry in the sense that it was so relatable in so many ways. P.7 I bascally did nothing but cry through the whole thing.
So glad I found this story. I will admit to the proverbial "Judging a book by its cover" when I found it. I assumed it would be another frat guy filled sissy story (not that there is anything wrong with that. I was looking forward to some raunch!). But what I got was such an insightful, thought provoking story about the love of self and the love of another. I love love. Thanks for sharing it.