All Comments on 'Pod Lust Ch. 03'

Holy shit I've just randomly checked and saw this chapter posted! I've waited so long, maybe since soon after the second chapter was posted, when I discovered this story. I hadn't read this chapter yet, but I've really liked the kind of transformations in the previous chapters (especially Jenny's), but there's some aspects of the story I didn't like. I hope this chapter improves upon the story, I didn't think it would be continued after so much time with no update

So here's my thoughts about your story so far: I think you've got potential to write transformation stories. I like your bizarre tfs in this story, they were detailed with exactly what happens and what each character feels during their transformations and when they drink (or get injected with) Danielle's breast milk. Also I like thick women, so the girls becoming thicker with fat is also very sexy. As I said in my previous comment, there's stuff I didn't like. I don't like the setup of the story, the whole horror thing and that they lose their minds and eyes forever, and I didn't like the parts with their bloody eye sockets or the sharp tentacles of the ilium connecting to their spines, or the ilium having sharp teeth in her mouth. I think there's something hot in tfs caused to characters when they don't know what they get into or don't choose it, but this is too much for me, it rightfully fits into the horror category and it's less for me. There aren't a lot of stories getting this aspect of transformation right. I specifically like your theme, of various weird creatures and very creative tfs like the fungi in their skulls, the mind-altering breast milk, and the girls becoming ilium (although again not the sharp teeth or tentacles). This story turned me on a lot but then I have post-nut clarity and focus on the parts that disgusted me, but because I think you've got potential, maybe you could try to write a new story with similar tfs but with less horror and more sensuality in it? I was contemplating writing to you anything because ultimately I didn't like this story, but I honestly think you deserve constructive criticism, hopefully you're not offended by this. That's all, and thank you

This was a pleasant surprise to see another entry in the series. I really liked the first two and this one is great as well. I know the eyeball removal and tentacles aren't for everyone but personally I find it really hot and hope to see more horrific transformations in the future!