by IJS0904
was going to give it a 5 - but... - any BBC in a LW story gets an automatic 5*. LW is LW. BBC is IR. pay attention. 2*
Great writing and a good story. But this chapter wasn't quite as good as the first. The other wives are flipping to lesbian acts too quickly with no hesitation or build up. And Dan (the unemployed husband) is now a billionaire's Executive material new hire and sex playmate and is now a major boxer taking out a security guard. But it seems to work well for the usual swinger-hating trolls. So, for running too fast and drifting off into too much fantasy, I'll give it a 4.
Well Anonymous #2: The story isn't listed under Loving Wives. It's under Group Sex, kinda where it belongs. Although your premise that any story containing a BBC can't be published under Loving Wives is flawed as well. You do you, and the rest of us will do something else.