All Comments on 'Poker Night'

Too many mistakes and ridiculous plot. A bit juvenile.

I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work. Do you plan on a part 2?

With these strip poker rules, people get naked fast! not sure what mistakes Mafen is referring to... but then again, just about all of the plot lines here at Lit are ridiculous, so you're in good company...

Opposed.

Ante.

Kraken.

Simple, but potential is there.

Good story, but you really need to figure out the correct usage of your and you're (you are). Your is possessive similar to his and her. You seem to have them backwards.

You're being too nitpicky, and I find your comment unnecessarily condescending. I got them right enough for you to know I know the correct usage, just say you found two typos, like the other guy did. Thank you for your constructive criticism, and you're welcome for the advice on your future commenting.

Ok so the poker game may have been a bit all over the place, but the next part was good albeit maybe too short. Definitely potential for a part two in a couple of different directions. I'd be down for another chapter.

Poke her night, indeed!

5*

Tc

I've never known of a game of strip poker to move quite that fast, but I also didn't have time to read a really long story, so it worked for me. I did expect more fucking though. Maybe next Thursday?

Great writing and fun story — please, when is your next chapter appearing?