by Savannah_Peach
You know how much I love this, and you, and am happy to have helped my darling. Great to see you writing again xxxx
What I would like to know?? Did you write this story in Fast Forward?? It would of been much better if you slowed it down and added a third, fourth or fifth page or even a multi part story
To Charmles,
I just started writing again after taking a long hiatus. This my first story, a second one is currently being worked on.
5 stars
Lesbians getting rough with each other is not my thing. But it was a good story.
Love what my baby girl wrote so amazing she is...very very special...your absolutely amazing....talk soon
Just one thing is sure about this story, that is that Sergeant Emery is totally unfit to be a police officer. What she does to Ashley, particularly with her pistol and nightstick, should earn her about ten thoroughly deserved years inside (and we all know what can happen to cops going to prison---that would be poetic justice).
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Loved the introduction, however the sex went way past my comfort zone for a lesbian story and stopped reading.
Seemed More Like NC / BDSM
Great story, sounds like something that would have happened near Southside C-Port.
great build and execution in the short story format. Poor ashley. BEt she comes back for more!
emery is hot, im imagining all the kinky shit we could do together right now
Great story Peach, thanks for the tip, I will read your other stories and follow you.
Wow, that Emery moves fast! It's a fast moving tale, rich in detail. Loved it, thank you