by Spector_Dugan
Wow, nice twist. Didn't expect them to do the full monty so soon after the last part. Curious to see where this goes. 5 🌟
Wow. The buildup and action are awesome. Can't wait until the next installment. Many thanks.
Ahhh, the 'climax' of the story (see what I did there?), or is it? This was outstanding and I hope there's more. Your writing style, mixing in the reality of life (nailed DW by the way, clearly you've been there) and the hot sex scenes are so well done. As a writer I'm influenced by your approach, although I sometimes find I get too detailed in the descriptions of sex and non-sex. You have refined the art of creating each personal story and weaving that into the hot make-out and sex scenes. Brilliant work. Thank you for a very satisfying series that builds to an amazing crecendo. I hope there's more to come (yeah, couldn't resist). Thanks for your writing, you've helped me see how I can be a better writer too. I look forward to the next in the series! Bravo!
I don't know if Spector will be going on the following path with this story but it will be veey interesting to see if Paul and Emily's marriage will survive this trip. It already seems that Paul and Mike's (or their wives?) friendship might not survive. Or will mutiple marriages end and everyone swap s/o's?
Obviously this isn't a Loving Wives or a BTB tale, but Paul clearly has some insecurity (that his penis is overriding for the moment lol) in regard to Emily getting the D from another man so only time will tell if this has a happy ending or a bitter ending.
Regardless, I'm hooked and I can't wait to read more.
Well, I guess there’s no way I can say that this guy’s an unreliable narrator. Nice one.
I hope there are many more chapters!
(here's to hoping Jeff's kids make an appearance - assuming they're adults - I love me some taboo!)
This finale was exciting!
Emily's comment to Jack about going slow made it obvious that Emily knew that they had sex before (the rainy day when Emily came out of the bedroom in the tiny bedroom) and knew how he felt going in! Jack didn't care what Alison & Paul said since he had already had shagged Emily.
Mike and Cassie did need the go ahead because they were with Paul & Alison most the time & fairly well agreed on the careful process in the full share till all were ready.
This was a good series, but obvious with the build up. The only obvious end is the 2 couples the near each other become and poly-living together or divorced, Paul goes with Alison, Mike & Emily struggle with what the decisions caused. Jack & Cassie go back to normal life of just doing whatever they want with whoever they want.
Keep up the great work
Definitely a great series. I hope you have more for us with these characters.
Very hot erotic read. 5stars
Soarin’ doesn’t fly over Everest, that’s the Matterhorn (the real one, not the one in Disneyland). It’s funny how something so trivial will jump out at me.
Great story.
What an incredible buildup to the top of the roller coaster! Thrilling. Paul's sphinx-like relationship to talking is a bit baffling, but what the heck, none of the others seem to be so burdened. Eagerly awaiting the next instalment. 5 stars & a fave.
The scene where it all comes together is very intense ... just the right mix of marital angst.
This series is so incredibly sad. Really no redemption to be found, no sympathetic characters at all.