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All Comments on 'Poly Polly's Alphabet Soup'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
WTF?

Cutesy and dumb! No redeeming value at all. I am not sure what you were trying to do, but it was an epic fail. 1* - my 1st ever on this site.

Bob150BobBob150Bobover 4 years ago
Distracted by the bold print in some letters.

To technical for a good sex story. Bob

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Didn't really get it

I don't remember reading ogg's story so the bold letters by paragraph didn't make a lot of sense to me (and didn't seem to spell anything immediately recognizable). Those letters served to distract from the main event(s), too, leaving the sex blasé and the alphabet soup in the title being a question mark. Perhaps a longer effort outside the 750 project and a bit of explanation might help.

yowseryowserabout 4 years ago

Hooo!

Lot going on here, props and shorts and kaleidoscopic genitalia. At least everyone is having fun...

Polyphonic.

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Polly is not the name mother gave me, nor does my lover's birth certificate read Anna. But together we are Polly+Anna living, loving and writing about our life in this tropical paradise. (81 degrees and cloudy at noon on January 23, 2020)