All Comments on 'Polyamory Ch. 07: Sex on the Beach'

He needs to fuck her. Don't worry about protection. Debra would look great with a baby bump

Keep up the great writing!

When I read Erotica (or Pornography) hearing sermons and discussing Theology rank VERY high as distractions and Turn-Offs. If one of your characters discarding or changing religeon is integral to the story, PLEASE, abreviate the whole section to maybe a sentence? "They talked at great length about what she was used to being taught and what she had heard today. It was refreshing to hear a non threatening loving version of Christs teaching, rather than Everything is Evil and you are going to Hell" Something along those lines. KISS. Keep It Simple Stu...errr Silly!!

Otherwise you have hooked me!

Fisting a "virgin' that he is saving their first time to be beautiful and no regrets?

Guy is a mature college professor and doesn't know about squirting and has to talk to a Dr?

No fundamentalist parents looking for her or forcing the issue and she has been gone a couple of days?

Last three chapters basically the same scenarios in different locales, nothing fresh to the story

Jumped the shark in this chapter, just really bad conceptually and little depth to what could be a really good story line. Hope it gets better

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