by jackie_em
Different but well written. Think Your choice for Your own take on a unique pony girl setting worked out well. Kept my interest in the plot line. And, yes, the obligatory pony girl fun and games part was done well, too ;-)
Thank You for sharing and please do write more.
Well written and easy to read. Your take on the Pony Girl genre is very good. I liked it alot and by not sugar coating the extremes made for an interesting read. I am surprised you didn't dive deep on the millionaire asshole that tried to buy Missy. It could have made for some exciting action. Just a thought.
Cheers
a great story, even kind of sweet, as in not a cruel story. please keep writing this kind of story..
I enjoyed this story. It was nice that you had the former competitors become lovers. Nice job.