All Comments on 'Pooja's First Experience as Bonded Whore'

Stopped reading the story when found that you wrote "small sister" (instead of "younger sister"), a raw translation of "choti behen". Why don't you write in your mother tongue instead of English if you are not comfortable in the language.

Very poor english ... 2*

Great story. Look forward to reading DAY 2.

Nayna, will surely improve on English. And Day 2 will be a great fun for you all... Thanks Devan Delicious1

Great story! I want part 2!