All Comments on 'Pool Party Bash Pt. 02'

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BiCumLovingGuyBiCumLovingGuyover 1 year ago

The cum play at the end was perfect, just like the whole story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great work, managing to still make the sex seem hot and natural and all the different combinations. I'd definitely read a third chapter, showing some of the inevitable regret over all the risks taken, followed by acceptance and enjoyment.

EmperorZenoEmperorZenoover 1 year ago

Really, really hot story! I would love new chapters exploring the group's dynamics and how they manage their new relationship and the hardships that come from it...plus, more hot and heavy group action.

HardsevenTXHardsevenTXover 1 year ago

Great installment. Would definitely love to see what happens in the morning. I would imagine lots of morning wood needing to be relieved.

GrandTruthseekeGrandTruthseekeabout 1 year ago

Good descriptions of the appearance of the characters, but I would like the same story about adult bisexual married couples, where several more experienced couples will seduce a less experienced and more attentive text!

bearman20bearman20about 1 year ago

hope you continue the story

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Part 3? - soon?

TigertownTigertown11 months ago

I need part 3!! Love the self sucking in this one. Would love more of that

SecretLifeOf1122SecretLifeOf1122about 2 months ago

Write part 3... PLEASEEEE....

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I let my cock do all the writing. If a sentence doesn't keep me hard, I don't put it in the story.

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