by soul71
Too much sex and very less story to my liking. One sex scene finishes and another starts. This is like a porno than an erotica. 😢
Now having read all these stories,I know Ira can get any magical girl pregnant if they allow it,but can the same be said about Bridgett and other human girls?.Honestly I wish Ira would get especially Bridgett and Layla the Librarian pregnant so Ira can have half demon babies with them.
Also we find out later on that he gives in and fucks some of his daughters due to pressure from them to please him completely.And to boot its not much difference since he fucks his Mom,Sister,and Grandmother,so whats the big deal doing his Daughters,it ain't like he can end up deeper in hell than he already is,and besides Grandma Luci already is the boss of hell and she ain't gonna punish Ira anymore than he is now,so Ira is basically given a free hall pass whoever he wants to fuck.Damn that boy gets all the pussy he ever needs,must be nice.
Still getting better. Characters becoming more realistic (despite the storyline) and can tell that Ira is not over all his petty revenge yet but he seems to be getting there, and he does need them for his existence. Wonder what exactly is Vikki's game plan?
Did you not get it proof read before releasing this, theres so many spelling errors sometimes it detracts from the enjoyment of the read ;(
I liked the "Uh, you can stop now..." bit as the porn shoot finished. Definitely made me chuckle, and also provided for a bit of revenge against Ira's father, who really is at fault for a lot of what Ira was going through but thus far hadn't suffered any consequences for it.
Actually, I was far more behind the revenge element in general this chapter than I was in previous ones, since Beth and Cybil seem more like they had it coming.
What part of Lit has to approve it before it show up on their site do you not understand.
Would love for Dominic to get an offer to see him fuck his family from a private collector with an incest fetish. Then see Dominic and Ira fuck, spit roast and double penetrate Bridget and Cora with Bridget and Cora finishing the performance off with some tribbing and a 69. Maybe even some pegging of the guys while they fuck the girls.
This series is great! I'm looking forward to the next part!
Strengthened with each encounter, and permanent. You'll just have to wait till part six to find out what problems will arise for Ira... if any.
Thanks for getting this Part out so soon after the last one! Loved it.
Please keep 'em coming. (as fast as you comfortably can)
I also love that Part 1's bitterness hasn't left Ira completely & he is doing the all to human thing of exploiting his powers for a bit of payback. (sure, it's a little mean & childish, but understandable, plus he's only 18, almost a child)
Also enjoyed the 'world building' you've done so far. And am curious (like Ira) how long the magical 'bonding' thing lasts. (is it temporary? Permanent? Is it 'refreshed' with every sexual encounter? Or is it deepened?) Makes me wonder what (if any) problems might crop up later, that he will have to deal with.
This story has drawn me in the same way Family Secrets and Family Secrets- New Orleans has.
I just have one question: Where is all the money!? Vikki bailed Cora out of bankruptcy. Even shitty, poorly written, poorly shot, the worst acting ever, porn makes money. It's a billion dollar per year industry. So what happened...?
I'm really curious to find out what happens with Beth. How far he pushes/torments her.
WAA
This just keeps getting better and better, I just hope Ira can juggle all the women he has in his life now.
It's really exciting to see how this story has been progressing.
Can't wait to see what comes next.