All Comments on 'Possessed By The Force Of Nature'

by Verhaalen

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Notice your stories lack any real emotional content, not for me. Good luck.

AnonymousAnonymous13 days ago

Beautiful story, just what I was looking for. I'm young and eager dude in a community of older people and for the first time I'm noticing the new dimension of senior sexuality, something that I never thought existed to the extent I've learned about. I'm making older friends and your narrative is a big help to me in my pondering about whether or not to proceed relationally in this world. Lust had long guided me, but this story reminded me of the value of love as well. It's easy to be "hungry," more is required to see value in a real encounter.

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A short story writer in various genres. Of Dutch birth but living in the UK for many years. I appreciate comments but do not respond to them, sorry.