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Whackdoodle about 4 years ago

Meh.

Usual story of girl getting brainwashed into being a sex slave. But why would a demon even care?

They been haunting humanity since time immemorial and at some point, it’s just the same thing over and over and over.

Anonymousabout 4 years ago

I like it!

Hope you’ll continue. I love slow transformations in morals, character, and ambitions.. And I love the combination of little bouts of resistance with rationalizations about her slide slowly down the slope. Really well done

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