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OdiouserOdiouseralmost 3 years ago

I always like to encourage new writers and this time it is not a chore. VERY well, almost flawlessly, written and the emotion shows. You must have been thinking of that love of yours when you described the woman's passion. But is her name really plain 'Jane'? Not bad for 3 weeks on the job. Keep it up!

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I write mostly very short stories about my lover and I. Some are inspired by real situations, others are just for fun. Maybe others will enjoy them as well.