All Comments on 'Power of Love Ch. 01'

to have you back. Another Great one started.

at times, but a little ham-handed. Oh. The police story. Not bad.

I started reading you because of the incestuous and group sex and sometimes wish you would add some in like you use to.

However, I realize sometimes throwing in sex just to have it in the story hurts the story. So, next story series please have a sexually themed story which will allowed for sex to be more easily useful to the story, like Melina and Laura having incestuous lesbian sex to make up; Don and Laura having a threesome with his mother; Don and Laura in a foursome with Molly and Paulina; or a visit by Don's estranged sister in town to fuck her little brother the Iron Crowbar and her surviving stud of a son the CEO Todd Burke, along with other things.

The next chapter of the story has been submitted, and hopefully will be published soon.

Ahhhhhhh this is great fast follow up stories. I so really enjoy all ur writings and cant tell u how much i appreciate all ur hard work to bring them to us. Please keep up the great work

I've read all your stories, and I'm absolutely fascinated. How you keep your threads straight is beyond me.

I've watched you evolve as a writer, and I'd love to learn how you construct a story! Pray tell?

Not being an American, I don't fully understand all your political references, but I noticed with concern your reference to the "Climate Change fraud" in terms that implied to me that you agree with those who consider Climate Change is a fraud.

From various references in your stories, it is clear that you either are a scientist, or have significant scientific understanding, which would make me very surprised and worried if you do not consider Climate Change is a real threat, for which there is substantial worldwide scientific evidence..

I hope I'm reading something into the reference that is either not there or is unintended.

john_sixfooter/storyline - it's like Michael Vick said about his runs: it's easier to just do them than explain them. :o) First, I have a document file with story ideas. The crimes, the clues, etc. Those ideas can come from anywhere: real crimes I read about, dogs doing great things (such as Pebbles being the inspiration fof Bowser finding Marie), and other things. I saw a car at a traffic stop with a little "Jesus fish' logo, and the whole 'Silverfish' story came to me right there, sitting in my carl. Sometimes I hear a song (like Cat's In The Cradle), and can shape my story around it.

And some themes present themselves from the past: 'Film Noir' led to Betsy, and then led to 'No Way Out', which only came to me later on; i.e. I did not have 'No Way Out' in mind when I wrote 'Film Noir'. The Rodman/Braselton thing has kept coming back up, but I did not originally plan for that to happen. It was there, and so I grabbed it and used it, and the continuity works.

Once I have a spine of the theme, I start filling it in, and Lord only knows how that's going to go as I begin to write it. A lot of my stories don't end up as I envisioned them when I began, and that's okay; I just 'begin with the end in mind' and go from there. And then I put in the filler, which is usually the political stuff, SOMETIMES based on current event, sometimes more general themes that I want to express my own views on.

I also have an overarching storyline such as Carole's progress to The Greatness, Teresa's stories (you're about to see a HUGE installment on that), and such, and so I fit those storylines into the stories and the stories into those storylines.

pe1er/climate change - I have a B.S. Chem. degree, which is a specialized degree for Chemistry majors. Yes, I'm a scientist, and that is why I *KNOW* 'climate change' is a fraud, based upon fraudulent 'data'. It's too long to go into here, so I'm gong to write a story that will hopefully very clearly explain my position on these issues. Stay tuned for that, and I am sure (and hope) the comments on that will be a good debate on the subject.

Not sure where we're going yet but a good read again.

*****Good read. Thanks for sharing.