by Daddysgirlfl
Arsehole of the century, "you're late ..... what's for dinner?"
Btw what was in the packet, did I miss something?
Another excellent entry in an absolutely top notch story! But come on! WTF is Meyer up to?
I like this story very much. You write it your way sir. It's yours. BUT (always a but, sorry not sorry) if you do happen to add possibly a third person to her and Steels relationship please keep it just a moment(s) through the years kinda thing. I'm a Sap for happy endings and really wanna see the Couple we get to read unfold before us the most end up sharing life together moving in the end.
P.s. We need a boat scene or office scene. I love what happens to a pencil skirt during sex scenes.
So good! I don't usually read IT, but I'm SO ready for the next chapter of this. Steele is delicious!
I think you need to finish this story! Not nice leaving your readers hanging like this
WHY THE FUCK WASTE TIME AND CONTINUE THE STORY WHEN YOU CAN ADD ANOTHER FUCKING CHAPTER WITH HER DIVORCING MYER AND MARRYING STEELE!!!
Could have been 5 points but only got 2 because you didn’t finish the story. I hate that!
For those asking where Chapter 3 is…. It was there. I tied all the loose ends up. Then I got complaints and people tanking votes because I didn't take the story the way they thought I should. So I pulled the last chapter because I got tired of all the bitching. Use your imagination like all us authors on Lit do and happily ever after the way you want it to go.
Great story. Not a cookie cutter at all. Unique. A writer tells their story and the readers will sort themselves out.