All Comments on 'Predator and Prey Pt. 18a'

Love kitten's budding confidence in who she is and her take charge demeanor. A delicious taste of the full chapter.

The best story ever just got better yet!

You are such a tease Mistress Tawny! But in the best sense!

A fabulous opening Salvo in Kitten's path to prostitution. So we have a coming (cuming) encounter with David on the horizon!

Thanks for not forgetting us. And what an addition!!! Sounds like Kitten can't wait for Luis to grant permission to suck some others!

I can see the relationship between mother and son is about to end. We know Kitten will be with Luis! So exciting||!

Kitten really manhandled that lawyer! We know who will rule there!

Thank you! Great section! Sounding like Carol and Kitten are close to a permanent break.

I do hope that the full chapter 18 will not have just the two sections about Kitten (This one and the one you say it at the end of the chapter). I don't mind reading about Carol's degradation, but Kitten and her feminization is the main course, and should rightfully take up the larger part of the chapter. This scene is awesome!

One of the best stories ever just got even better!

Really hot sene. Can't wait for kitten to move away from Carol.

And how awesome that Kitten's titty flesh is being to appear!

Thanks for giving us this taste of where the chapter is headed. Liking Kitten giving out orders, and hoping his end with Carol will be happening very soon.

You have us panting for the Dante's gay club chapter!

Great writing! Great opening for the chapter! Looking forward for another December chapter post!

I'd like to express my appreciation for this first scene!

Still thinking about what will happen at the birthday party. Sorry you hit some writer's fatigue, but I know you will come back with a vengeance!

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year1 Thanks for this enticing look at the next chapter!

Best story on the site!!!!!

Hard to focus as Christmas approaches. Fully understandable. But based on this fabulous start, I think all will be sorted out extremely well!

Superb opening! I'll be watching daily for the full chapter!

I guess the holiday season complicates things as far as new posts being prompt. I do appreciate your willingness to give your fan this advance.

It will be interesting to see if this "happily married" lawyer and father of two sons will become a regular character. I think Kitten will go in many directions though.

Kitten might be a little too rough on his mom, even if she has herself become nasty and drug-addicted. But I know she is asking for it. What will Kitten say or think when he hears she is pregnant? Wow!

This short lead-in is better than most FULL STORIES!!! Kudos to you, Mistress Suede!

Kitten has the business side of things all set for when he/she begins prostituting. Obviously that is exactly what he/she is doing with Attorney Axelrod! Eager for the rest of the chapter!

Hoping full chapter will be posted soon!

Basically it has been over six weeks since we got anything aside from this short scene.

Loved every bit of this series, Eagerly waiting for more...