All Comments on 'Prelude to a Nap'

particularly when preceded by sex. Nice little story.

Sweet loss-of-innocence progression.

Good interior monologs.

Positive all the way through! :+))

Great details. Good job! Enjoyed the mutual respect and concern that these characters have for each other.

Very well written. Descriptions were very detailed resulting in a great visual experience. This author definitely draws you into the story and makes you feel and experience what the characters are feeling and experiencing. She definitely has a lot of well developed talent. Will look for more submissions from this author! Job well done.