by MathGirl
Very well written. Descriptions were very detailed resulting in a great visual experience. This author definitely draws you into the story and makes you feel and experience what the characters are feeling and experiencing. She definitely has a lot of well developed talent. Will look for more submissions from this author! Job well done.
Great details. Good job! Enjoyed the mutual respect and concern that these characters have for each other.
Sweet loss-of-innocence progression.
Good interior monologs.
Positive all the way through! :+))
particularly when preceded by sex. Nice little story.