All Comments on 'Premonitions: Senior Year Ch. 02'

Keep going, please.

Great so far, please write more soon.

Love this story and how you have wove it through three different categories. Just thought it might be helpful to tag it mind control and maybe scifi/fantasy to give it a chance to be seen by those who enjoy what your story is doing. Your keeping that angle more subdued than most so I don't feel the category is not an issue but the tags could help it get seen by more.

Just a thought. Looking forward to more. Thanks

A very yummy addition. Thank you!

Good premise.

Much too fast.

Nothing slow. Just BOOM! and major sex is happening. That's simply not erotic.

Three stars.

Oh goodie, a comrade in arms! Truly enjoying this series, it is well thought out and written. I look forward to reading more. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.