All Comments on 'Presenting Jessica Ch. 02'

Please keep on writing this, just add more spirits in your story to animate it))))))))

Nice story - It has promise if you have additional original material - keep trying, there are people out there that get off on this sort of thing (like me) so don't disappoint and please write another chapter

This has the makings of a good story. Keep at it, its looking pretty good. I like the character you are building round Jessica. Julies Mistake is a good model to go with and you are up at that level. Look forward to next chapter.

Second chapter debases her more.

Prose quality continues.

Now debase her more.

You've almost written this too well. I've empathised with jessica now and can no longer objectify her. I've basically lost my erection.

I think it's a fine line that's been crossed. I can read stories about gang-rape etc but I feel hurt for her. Also, he would need her consent to publish the vid on the internet.