by SubtleDeviance
Crazy erotic! Excellent buildup with a good payoff. My only problem was that it switched grow past-tense to present-tense right in the middle. Won't stop me from reading it again, though!!
Well done. I agree the ending was kind of abrupt, but not in a bad way. I suppose it leaves it to our own imaginations to figure how they got themselves out of the school and home. Maybe you just went for the gusto and wrote yourself into a jam. But the gusto was worth it. 5-stars, easily.