All Comments on 'Pretty Pissy Panties'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very good. Ending was a bit abrupt, but I enjoyed it

Halston775Halston7758 months ago

Crazy erotic! Excellent buildup with a good payoff. My only problem was that it switched grow past-tense to present-tense right in the middle. Won't stop me from reading it again, though!!

ArseniqueArsenique5 months ago

Well done. I agree the ending was kind of abrupt, but not in a bad way. I suppose it leaves it to our own imaginations to figure how they got themselves out of the school and home. Maybe you just went for the gusto and wrote yourself into a jam. But the gusto was worth it. 5-stars, easily.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Sequel would be great

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Probably should start continuing some of these series I started... It's so much harder to continue a series than it is to write something completely new.