All Comments on 'Primal Lust'

this was great! In my opinion, more women should take control of their lives like this!!! I hope this is not the only experience she has of this nature.

Curiousity killed the cat...but in this story, curiousity got the pussy fucked! Exciting and graphic! Arousing and vivid! This woman writes as great as she looks...and that's pretty damn good!!!!!

Rick

Great descriptions. I enjoyed reading it. Wasn't totally nonconsent.

I loved the photo of the author and I can imagine her being the girl in the story. Wow!!!!

I hope she enjoys her feedback.

Maybe I can help her write another chapter. :P

This is a well-done tale; tightly scripted with nicely described action!

I liked it, other than the fact that you kept repeating things like "my big nipples" and "his huge cock", Too much emphasis on something is never good.

You could have also made the sex a little more decriptive. It was a bit short-lived after the wonerful anticipation you built up

She wanted it

I loved it

Great build up.

Could've used more descriptive sex.