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by principessa07

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DaveDeSadeDaveDeSadeabout 17 years ago
Nice job.

I like the way you let the tension build. Too many writers get to sex in the first 5 minutes of a relationship, but this was very believable.

walkingeaglewalkingeagleabout 17 years ago
Excellent well written and passionite!

Another great job, by a ghifted writer! Passion chemistry and hot sex!

Wonderful!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

holy fucking shit that was so fucking hot!

ChrisTor22ChrisTor22almost 9 years ago
Yes......straight-laced.....but very sensuous!!

One can tell you have been writing for ages....great development, perfect grammar, syntax and spelling .... Can you make this a Chapter 1, and allow yourself to progressively take Kate into wilder scenarios?? PLEASE keep writing!!

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