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by principessa07

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ChrisTor22ChrisTor22almost 9 years ago
Yes......straight-laced.....but very sensuous!!

One can tell you have been writing for ages....great development, perfect grammar, syntax and spelling .... Can you make this a Chapter 1, and allow yourself to progressively take Kate into wilder scenarios?? PLEASE keep writing!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

holy fucking shit that was so fucking hot!

walkingeaglewalkingeagleabout 17 years ago
Excellent well written and passionite!

Another great job, by a ghifted writer! Passion chemistry and hot sex!

Wonderful!

DaveDeSadeDaveDeSadeabout 17 years ago
Nice job.

I like the way you let the tension build. Too many writers get to sex in the first 5 minutes of a relationship, but this was very believable.

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