All Comments on 'Prom Queen Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Good times!

Love the cheer squad being there, nice touch!

justincbenedictjustincbenedictabout 8 years ago
This is great writing...

I love the whole humiliation "you cry like a little girl" stuff. You have a great talent. Keep writing! And the "I will make him a slobbering mess" It's greatly imaginative. I imagine the wife as looking like Christina Hendricks in "Mad Men"

ptebadenptebadenalmost 8 years ago
Interesting and very hot

You have talent writing. I am hopfuly waiting for more chapters. This one, perhaps, goes very quickly but many things are for coming. I hope, praying for it, you won't late.

By the way, when will we see next chapters of "The ten thousand dollar decision" ? Sorry, I know this one is another story but I can't help myself to be patient

jleniljlenilalmost 8 years ago
Great

I love this story. The only thing that could make it better is if the ladies enjoyed cigars while watching.

joela_99yjoela_99yover 7 years ago
Great, Fantastic!

Having him cry and blubber are great touches, if she had him kiss her feet/heels would have been icing on the icing.

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