by spankedhusband
I love the whole humiliation "you cry like a little girl" stuff. You have a great talent. Keep writing! And the "I will make him a slobbering mess" It's greatly imaginative. I imagine the wife as looking like Christina Hendricks in "Mad Men"
You have talent writing. I am hopfuly waiting for more chapters. This one, perhaps, goes very quickly but many things are for coming. I hope, praying for it, you won't late.
By the way, when will we see next chapters of "The ten thousand dollar decision" ? Sorry, I know this one is another story but I can't help myself to be patient
I love this story. The only thing that could make it better is if the ladies enjoyed cigars while watching.
Having him cry and blubber are great touches, if she had him kiss her feet/heels would have been icing on the icing.