All Comments on 'Promises Pt. 05'

Excellent!

I like the conflicts you’ve introduced into the series, and can see several different directions this could go. That has kicked my interest up a couple more levels. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.

Just like the saturday western movie when the heroine was about to get run over by the locomotive, or the settlers were about to be slautered by the indians , or perhaps the homesteader ranchers were about to be done in by the outlaw rustlers the cavalry arrives with trumpets blaring or possibly wild bill hiccup rescues everyone with his 105 shot sixgun.

our only hope now is for one of the afore mentioned heroes to appear in time for Peter and Kira to be rescued from the nefarious Angelo and his mafia uncles hoodlum gangsters. Will they arrive in time OOHH Golly

nail biting drama, LP

For me, I'm wondering about some loose ends:

- what happened with the snatched camera from the spy on the beach

- what is the outcome of the discussion between Anna and René

Maybe I'm not patient enough...

For the reviewers: please, abandon my comment about loose ends: I was too Impatient indeed.