All Comments on 'Promises Pt. 06'

by Michael_Butterfield

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ender2k2k over 2 years ago

Arg, cliffhangers. Great story. Thanks

Anonymousover 2 years ago

Just as the Saturday movies. The heroine got missing. Did the bad guys get her? Is the U.S.Cavalry on its' way?Will she be torn asunder by the steam engine? OOHHH golly gosh! Will my fingernails ever grow back??? LP

GaiusPetronius over 1 year ago

The scene where the three act out a simulation of Peter and Kira kissing while fucking and fucking while kissing is, for me, off-puttingly reminiscent of the "Ceremony" ritual in The Handmaid's Tale. ////

You have created an intriguing dynamic to their "thrupple."

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