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She sighed sadly. "It will be all right, we will adapt." - She SAYS "we," but she MEANS "you."

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@onlythelonelylove, it seems that cagivagirl is the new Richard Gerald: A good writer who creates a male MC with a character and backbone, and by the end of the story performs a spinectomy on him.

Another entertaining story. That is not a surprise any more. How Cagivagurl uses the same plot but makes it new and interesting is a surprise. For a rather long story it read quickly. Completed it in under two hours. Great job.

Superior developer of an amazing story. I could feel the movie version as my emotions went from anger, disappointment and understanding. Thanks for a hel’lova ride.

You have described one of the ugliest sides of life in your story. People who sell themselves and their ideals for money. In fiction, this may sometimes go well, but in reality it always leads to disaster. It's a pity that you turned it into a CUCKOLD story. And one more thing I would like to note, I despise men who have sex with their wives even though they know they are having sex with other men. The statement you made in your story, "Did her time with him take anything from your relationship?" shows me that a lot of people are really just living superficially now when they portray the exclusivity of sex between two partners who love each other as if it's a common thing. I'm glad it's just a story. Your way of telling stories is very good, there is nothing to deny. Even though your story is very long, I still read it.

A great story from an excellent author. I was rooting for and against the same character more than once. You got me emotionally involved with the characters, a sign of a great author.

Excellent!

Well written but if he were I, there would be only two pages of story. First page of the reveal and me seeking a divorce and the second page of me finding someone that actually loves, honors and respects me.

You can write the hell out of a story. Amazing talent. That's why it breaks my heart that you write such weak men. How could any woman love a weak person like that. She becomes a literal, actual whore and a cheat, and just like that, they are back together? Just keep accepting the lies, no problem. "Go fuck whoever you want. As long as you come home, because I "Luuuvvv" you..." I'm so frustrated, such a waste of talent.

Maybe some could take it, but I would not be married to a whore. Get away from the slime.

No, just fucking no. No man with any self-respect would try again with a whore like her. I'll give you that she probably wouldn't fuck around again, but honestly, the hurt would be ever-present. The knowledge that she chose the asshole and money over him. She not only broke her vows but disrespected and humiliated him and he, to an extent, let her, which is pretty bad in itself.

The worst part is that the other guy always gets off easy in this writer's stories. There's never any real consequence.

You are a very talented writer. Couldn’t stop reading.

Didn't like him signing the contract - but the story was pretty good for 13 pages. Then GagiGirl started her normal story in pages 14-15 turning the man into a wimp. GagiGirl - get your head out of your ass. Put a normal or alpha male in these stories and you'd be getting tons of 5's. 1* because of GagiGirls normal shit.

i loved the story, it had its highs and lows, just as in real life, good job, you are a great author and i read all you stuff, oh ya, 5 stars.

Gotta laugh at Mr. AnnieWannie down there. "Alpha male..." Hahaha. That is so hilarious, dude. Did you really just make up an upper-class of males and put yourself in it? Hysterical. Okay, if you an "alpha" male, I'm a "turbo" female. That one level higher. You wouldn't understand. You just an "alpha." Sorry. Randi.

Every time I start one cagivagirl story first thing I ask myself how she going fuck up the ending this time

Made it through because the author has undeniable talent, but by the fourth page I was done with this protagonist. It's always grating when an author has a character respond to a ridiculous situation in a way that no normal person would. The "you're not losing anything by having an unfaithful spouse because they're only unfaithful when they wouldn't be around you anyway" makes absolutely no sense. It's a shame. This story could have been, and occasionally hinted at being, a morality tale about the perils and pitfalls of Faustian bargains.

"Jeepers, Darren, I'm getting pretty damn angry at the insults. Can we just have a conversation without all the animosity and name calling? Just think about it. At the moment, all you're doing is firing shots. Take a breath, open your mind and think about it clearly for just one moment." so this part is very interesting to me, is it her delusion of her "prostitution" carry over to the fact that she would want to stay married to a person that thinks of them in the way he thinks about her now. it feels like he lost all respect for her l be interesting to see where this leads lol sorry back to it then

sorry these ppl are too fucked up to be where they are in their life. the real world she would be a call girl at beast a street walker at worse and he would most like find out that he really doesnt have morals or a backbone and be a drunk drugged up bass player or something. it feels like either ur characters are lying to us or u are lol in other words ur characters dont match the story. although i did enjoy the read. even though it was filled with contradictions

he didnt even get a post-nup lol im afraid to keep reading i really hope i dont get to page 15 and he is eating asshole's creampies im going to be pissed lol although u do have cuck shit tag on here hmm damn it its like 2 trains crashing i just gotta keep reading to see how far this dipshit falls

Great storey, you are a very creative writer, I enjoy all your storeys. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

damn commentary comments going on here lol sorry. the very interesting thing about this story is not once was the word respect used. when u have breaking of vows, values, and morals in a story and not once use the word respect sounds very weak. makes me wonder about u tbh very intriguing. ok well i'll stop commenting now

Another lovable and warm and touching story from your hand.

Thank you

sorry i know i said i was done but this, "We are friends and lovers, but I don't love him." rofl i mean was this ur character's stupidity delusion or ur's? well, whom ever it was this line made the whole story worth it and turned it into a humor/sat cat story

well crap ignore last comment damn word ended up all the way on page 9 lol took u long enough

another author have to add to the start off good and then turns to shit.. doesnt take anything away from your relationship..... why yes, yes it does. marriage the agreement that the only person you will ever have sex with till you die is your spouse.. jesus christ fuckin new age millennial dumb ass thinking.

It's really, really interesting to contrast the comments of the overwhelming majority of LW readers--both members and anonies--with those of the LW authors.

Too Stupid by half.

Neither main character had any sense. I know this is fiction but both characters are meant to be intelligent adults.

Couldn't believe the boss wasn't done for Sexual harassment.

I didn’t see him doing anything wrong to apologize. Sorry I did see him do something wrong and that was letting the bitch back in his life

Encouraging Cunt and Cuck gropes is disgusting.

Most guys would divorce the bitch in real life, only simps would stay married and only scum whores who dont give a fuck about their partner would even consider sleeping with someone else.

This is why LOVE is a four letter word. It has power to do many things but far to many men allow it to make them stupid. LOVE is a cornerstone of a healthy relationship. But respect, trust, loyality and just as important. How do you rebuild trust once broken? How can you respect someone and be loyal to them after you crushed everything he holds dear? LOVE her all you want. Fuck her like the whore she is. Hell, share a house with her if it makes you feel good. But for GOD DAMN surely don't let love blind you.

She may never do anything like that again. I just wouldn't be able to look at myself in the mirror, knowing what all my friends and family might be thinking, and respect myself to not be true to myself

Ah, let me see, whose life would I ratcher have, the bitter wifeless “cunt and cuck” anon loser below, or the happy, successful life of the fire giving protagonist ? Yup, a rhetorical question as the answer is so obvious. But bitter anon can look in the mirror at his pride accompanied by lonely nothingness, as it shall almost certainly always be. Yipee🤪

Worrying about what everyone else thinks rather than what your brain and heart want for you, is a sign of real weakness and dooms you to defeat. Happy in a loving relationship forged by mutual forgiveness and that has overcome loyalty breaches beats a cold, empty, prideful

bed every time. What the neighbors think is for teenagers, not real adults.

Fascinating, well told story. Compelling, even if flawed, characters who fight there way to a bruising, but good outcome, which they deserved, notwithstanding the howling from the usual angry, bitter, loser, tough guy wanna be misfits that loiter on this website, freely over sharing their unhappy views of the world and lives alone im small crappy apartments or their parents’ basements.

You do quite well capturing the non-linear complexities of managing life, successfully, in interesting stories with characters acting on opportunities often outside the expected lives of most of us readers.

Very well played. More please.

Story made me think of the 1969 movie - "The Magic Christian" staring Peter Sellers and Ringo Starr where they depict the world's richest man and his adopted hobo son as set out on a journey to test the limits of human vanity and greed through a series of "money games". Together they embark on a series of bizarre and degrading tests around London to illustrate the depths to which mankind or womanhood will sink in pursuit of money: any man or woman has his price and will do literally anything no matter how demeaning, humiliating or opprobrious if the price is right. The final big scene affirms that people will do anything for money..the scene depicts a large group people diving into a cesspool of human shit and fighting each other to grab as much money as they possibly can.

Again, this should have been ended on page 3 or 4. I challenge the authorto allow a revision to this story...

DOL

Note to author: This story is pure fantasy. In real life the husband would have divorced the hooker wife after the first sleepover she had with her boss. He also would have served everyone in her company detailing this agreement withe the agreement attached. Then I would have thrown everything she owned out on the lawn and went to find a new home.

Not bad. Having spent much of my life in the military, I am well acquainted with marriages and the things that go wrong (and get better). I was used as a sounding board for more of my troops than I care to remember. One wrong, then two and they do not cancel each other out. I've always let my guys know that if they really, really wanted to make it work, the past has to stay in the past. Your forgive, but of course never forget. IO also told them some of the same things, that if they were willing to lay down their lives for their wives, they also had to learn to forgive. Also that when we keep secrets from our spouses, like porn for instance, we are in point of fact cheating on them as well. Especially if we get off on it (literally). We are "giving" ourselves to another woman in our mind (and possibly heart) if not in person. I have seen some end this way, getting back together and some that do not survive it. That all depends on the depth or the love that is there and how solid they are.

You write hellaciously well, but this was just an excruciatingly long trip to an undeserved RAAC.

WORST STORY EVER..THE MOST BORING

A very well written story that has a serious flaw. An illegal contract has no validity and anyone who puts an illegal agreement in writing is an idiot.

Don't bother requesting to do a revision. The author is vehemently against it and won't allow it.

DOL

I skip half the story

It started out great then went to shit I kept skipping and it got worst

Basically this story was a waste of my time

Your a talented writer, no mistake about that. But how can you write such repeating drivel*. No man as you have portrayed would ever accept his wife sleeping with her boss......a voyeur maybe but not this type of guy. If your going to write such stories then for God sake learn something about men. Because you obviously don't have a clue.

I liked it !!

I'm not sure I could have held on as long as Darren did. I probably would have just left and gotten on with my life, but I can see how such a series of events could happen. Perhaps a happy ending is always possible if two people are willing to go through the gutter and emerge in a crystal river when the journey ends.

Well written but implausible story. No husband with any sort of self worth would let his wife do this crap.

Second time around. Cagivagurl, you really love writing about contrived fucked up situations and relationships. But you do overbake the story somewhat. There were elements in this story l like and there were parts l absolutely loathed.

I got my wife to read the story and give me her opinion. Her answer was succinct from her point of view. If l did what Coby did, ie, sought a hefty promotion by sleeping with my female boss, and laid on my wife like Coby did to her husband, then a ruinous divorce would’ve followed quick smart. Yep kicked to the curb pronto.

And yes, that confirmed my feelings about Coby who after started the ball rolling. If she had’ve been my wife l’d have kicked her to the curb so fast she wouldn’t had time to blink.

Really, l think that’s how any self respecting person would think and act.

Coby was self entitled and totally selfish to the extreme.

She deserved her forthcoming divorce, she deserved it big time.

I kept the score l gave it earlier, it was worth that

Lol! So delusional author. Author thinks a male from her female lens. Coby failed as an ethical employee, failed as a loving and loyal wife. She is character less and less valued. Why to put up with her? In reality if a man being confronted by wife's boss to sleep with him..lol..Man he is dead. Wtf is wrong with authors brain?

Just imbecilic misandrist cuck twaddle. In other words, the usual from this mentally ill author.

Coby "No, we weren't. We were apart, but we were still married, still seeing each other. I thought we were trying to figure shit out. Find ways to make it work."

Darren "Yeah, you're right. I have been an asshole, as well, and I'm not proud of it."

Okay Darren screws three women and Coby screws one guy that she admits to over 18 months. How is this comparable?

Darren "You can't let it get to you, Coby. You're there now. The important thing is, you recognize you made mistakes, and you don't make them again."

Coby "Easy to say, Darren, and I think I could do it. But that would depend on whether you were going to be on my side, standing beside me, supporting me."

I call bullshit. Coby has a screaming match with Darren when she think he is screwing Wyatt's model girlfriend while she is playing sextoy to Wyatt for 18 months. Coby would do this again in a heartbeat.

After Coby becomes CEO Wyatt continued to see her. Does Darren really think these visits are platonic? Yeah right. The final screwup on Darren's part is having kids with Coby. Coby has already proven she will screw for months and position. Darren should get each child DNA tested. They probably aren't.

One of your best stories. I know of couples with far worse problems that got back together and went on to happy and loving marriages. Very well written, a 5.

No real man would have put up with this. Wyatt would accidently loose his balls. 1*

Cagivagurl - you have terrific ideas for stories but you have absolutely no idea about men. If you're not a woman then you are gay. There's no way the men in your stories would go along with their wives being with another man like in this story. I found myself actually being pissed off and thinking about what would happen to Wyatt if I had been Darren. Coby would have been gone shortly after the word GO. Maybe you write these stories like this just to drag them out.

I kind of loved it (I did however only start really reading from like page 6 on because agreeing to let his wife sleep with her boss was nonsense) Reminded me of Separate Vacations. I don't know why he thinks he did anything wrong? He didn't do anything bad.

His wife was sleeping with another dude and he needed a break and to live his own life. He needed to get his manhood back.

Sure it sucked at first, but in the end it all worked out. She got to have sex with her boss who she liked when she traveled and he got to become famous and have sex with hot girls and a celebrity. Win win pretty much.

He got lucky though and could've backfired on him.

No

Agree with last 2 comments

Definitely needs super glued pussy and surgery for other half of couple

I didn't say what was super glued in

Painful

I went back and read the first 6 pages this time. However, I did skip all of Wyatt's dialogue because it was still nonsense lol. I think this is by far the best story you have. Well done. I've read this story 4 times now.

I agree with wargamer and wakeupnow.

I do enjoy your writing. Tend to stick through the end hoping for a different direction but every time you tend to make the scumbag guy asking to sleep with a wife seem not so bad. The wife who dies it against her husband's wishes or under extreme pressure of the husband as logical and sensible, and the guy who doesn't accept it as unreasonable until he dies. I buy the let it go to move forward. Letting it go doesn't mean ignoring it. I could let it go but could never get back with her.

I feel this would be a much stronger story if he had hooked up with the guys girlfriend in the end and they fell in love. As is.... extraordinary unsatisfying... which i would be ok with if it were also realistic.

Would love to hear your explanation of your fascination with this direction. It baffles me... flipping the script with a guy doing this to his wife and it's apparent. Even in your story she's horrified that after sleeping with her boss for months and rubbing it in his face AND expanding the 'agreement' to include sex when she's home (jesus how nuts did it have to get???) She gets pissed when she finds he's had sex with someone else... and so foes the asshole. So... confusing why it's ok for the wife

Again... love to hear your feedback on these points! Maybe im missing a point here somewhere...

A great story, as usual

Great story, but I hate the Femdom agitprop ending.

Regardless of permission this story needs..snd will...be rewritten by me. Since I do not see any copyright protection, and rewrites can be,done.

Stay tuned!!

DOL

Story went to shit the last 2-3 pages. I love and hate this authors stories. I think the author is a feminist and loves to torment her male readers. That's OK - I have no problem giving a great story a 1* for turning men into wimps.

sf_operative63 - would love to see a rewrite of almost all of her man hater stories.

Anonymous...stand by. you will see something in a few weeks on my "Overwatch" stories.

DOL

Rewriting other author’s stories because you don’t like how they developed, especially in such a hostile manner, is an admission that you’re an uncreative, talentless shit-stain masquerading as a writer. Also a raving asshole, although that may be redundant.

Why not just sign up for an anger management class? Or take up boxing to work out some of your personality issues?

Or play a lot of Russian roulette. I don’t care.

I really wanted to like this until about page three I did

Just two greedy people clinging to each other in a love hate relationship that we're willing to prostitute their beliefs and sell their souls to the devein.

The only redeeming part was that Wyatt suffered some emotional damage at the end.

I really wanted to like it but all I could do was 2 stars

Wow ! Yet another Hallmark ending ! What a surprise ... not .

It's a story , but like most, if not all of your stories , the main characters are unbelievable . I believe any man faced with that kind of proposition from his wife would be unlikely to end up still married to her .

15 pages of nonsense . I think every one of your submissions that I have read follow a very similar path .

I suspect the only reader who can possibly gain any enjoyment from your work are those with a cuckold mentality or female superior fetishism.

In an attempt to stop people like me from rubbishing your drivel , Lit should allow a minus marking . No comments , just a minus score . And perhaps when a certain target of minuses are accrued , your profile will be eliminated .

No, I'm sorrry. This stunk. And I saw it from the beginning and said '15 pages? Are you shitting me??' And yet read the whole thing, praying there was a curveball somewhere. They are the same person, Coby, and Darren. MONEY. I kept saying, right up to page 5. "Don't do it, Darren. The only way out is to divorce her and walk away. She was a pathetic money-hungry bitch, he was a secure, parsimonious bastard. The ends don't always justify the means. 'What happens in Vegas, stays in Vegas.' Sound familiar?? The Bear disapproves. I'll never learn.

The BEAR

Just nor believable. You turn wife into a true whore and hubby goes from being strong to stupid. Of course you have him apologizing to the whore at the end and make him so lame he wants to be with a well heeled slut. You go out of your way to make your husband characters weak and pathetic. Awful

15 pages of 1.

I don’t know why this story didn’t get better ratings then ii did. I think it was one of your all-stars. I enjoyed it very much. There were lots of twists and turns that mimic life and still had a happy ending. Kudos!!

Good writing but unrealistic plot. I have no doubt in real life Darrin would have went directly to HR in the company and spilled the whole dirty story. Nobody husband would agree to this nonsense.

One last comment. Darrin needs to do a DNA test on the kids. He needs to make sure they aren't wyatts

This author has so much potential - does he/she read these comments?? They are essentially the same for many of the stories. CAGIVAGURL - quit turning your fucking lead male characters into fucking wimps. That is all!!

It was a very good story until page 15, then it went to Hell in a Hand Basket!... pages 1 - 14 = 5🌟s, page 15 = 1 🌟

Fred

In the end you wind up with a washed up old whore and a husband who is just a pimp too weak to cut his losses and move on. The worst is the whore. She just spit in the face of everyone who got past over so she could fuck her way to the top. If these are the kinds of people you surround yourself with then I feel sorry for you. As always I never rate cuckold trash above one star.

OK. I read this stupid piece of shit until the 3rd page.

This boss goes to this guy's work place to confront him about the divorce. And is worried about what he is going to say in his divorce petition. Because if it's adultery with her fuckijg her boss then it will ruin his wife's and the boss's reputation and get them both fired.

Uhhh...after these "contracts" are signed and executed fully?

Neither the wife nor this husband have a damn thing to worry about. She doesn't have to fuck him or even work again.

They will have written proof of his offering money and a promotion in exchange for sex. Not only can they sue the company for millions and millions, but under the laws of most western democratic/republican governments there are criminal laws against sexual harassment. The boss is going to jail.

The story makes zero sense beyond on that point. If the boss is SO worried about him naming him in the divorce decree without even any written evidence...so worried that he'll risk a physical confrontation that this guy is simply going to name him in a divorce court document as guilty of adultery?

Then the rest of the story makes no sense. Why would he then produce WRITTEN executed contracts doing something so illegal it could land him in jail...not to mention end his career and cost his company millions of dollars once presented as evidence in a court and legal action?

The entire premise is absurd.

And to the author. Good lord...your insight into mentally deranged douchebags just get better and better. This boss character is ridiculous. Pulled up from the gutter by his boot straps. Illegal immigrant with a heart of gold who through the sweat of his own brow, lots of plucky desire, and innate brilliance became CEO of a multi million dollar successful company. AND he just happens to be the Kiwi version of Jean Claude Van Dam?! He's a karate/jujitsu master as well? Wow. Next he'll explain how he gave up his successful side gig as a shuttle astronaut? How about that time he figured out cold fusion over lunch with one of his old college professors?

Give us all a break. He's an immoral whore monger who likes to break up marriages and fuck married women sending them home to give sloppy seconds to their idiot husbands. Manipulating the husbands into actually agreeing to it.

Completely delusional. So far fetched to anyone with half a brain that it's just insane.

The prostitute wife actually is planning on settling down to have kids after 4 years of being a whore!? Hahahahaha...that's rich...please don't let this character ever procreate. Don't have children even in this fucked up imaginary literary world written here.

I made it less than 3 pages in. If you are reading this considering tackling all 15 pages of this horseshit? Just don't.

None of the kids are his btw

Good story but the ending sucked. It didn't need to be BTB but it could have been he simply moved on.

“Unless you’ve experienced a love this powerful “ proceeds to mention infidelity for money LMAOO

Cagivagurl, you write beautifully. You took your characters through all the things in the story, to the ending you had in mind. to have the story be the way you wanted to write it, so it needed to be like that.

Coby's dream is her career. She made her bargain with the devil to get her dream. Darren's dream was his recording studio, and he acquiesced with the devil's bargain and took what he needed for his dream.

I wanted Darren to say, "Coby, you are my dream, my only dream. I have no dream but you. The rest is just how we get through this world. We don't need him or his tainted money." To which Coby would say, "Darren, you're my dream. I want my dream. To hell with that son of a bitch." It might have been a shorter, dull story for some folks, I don't know. It would have been a different adventure.

I have only read 4 chapters,and it will be a fun story but he is one stupid man. Real life he would suggest to marriage counselor to solve their problem,after that he would either get his divorce or she would decide to stay married without out probably fucking all the clients and top executives.

What did Wyatt learn?

So good. Second read.

Liao, such stupid men and the whores they love. Why do you enjoy writing such longwinded cuck stories?

I can see many don’t like your stories as they do tend take while and bend around a bit to find their way to the end but that is life too. Not everyone jumps to the chase and changes course so quickly an so there we have your stories, I few times they might seem to be plowing the same ground twice but in the end they get somewhere honest and true. I will not your works in the music industry seemed to me the better groundedmaybe something in your past but well done.

Cagivagurl is an excellent writer but she must despise her readers. She constantly repeats dialogue ad nausea. She bludgeons her readers because she thinks they are too stupid to understand what she is presenting unless she shoves it in our faces over and over again. This story could have been written with half the words and nothing would have been lost.

There was a huge plot hole in this story. The $150K payoff to pimp his wife out to Wyatt would have been dwarfed by what he could have received (especially after having gotten his hands on the ‘contract’) by the settlement from the family values company! I do understand though why Cag wrote it as she did. The money had to come from the wife not Wyatt. It was her story to tell.

Excellent as always. Keep them coming.

So another pimp and prostitute story from Cagivagurl. "Sure honey it's okay to go screw the boss and 50 or 60 clients. I'll still love you and stay married to you."

If you’re willing to throw yourself in front of a truck to save someone, that’s love. If the one you love is the one driving the truck right over the top of your marriage - that’s not love.

Vomitivo

You can couch it anyway you want (it took CAG 15 repetitive pages trying to do it) but Darren was as much of a prostitute as his wife

It was near the bottom of page 4 when hubby became a bigger whore than his wife! Just a long drawn out rehash of ‘Indecent Proposal’

You had a good story but completely ruined it when you had the MMC forgo on all his principles.

I like the general idea and concept, but when Darren caved for the $$ I was disappointed. The fact that Coby continued to try to interject Wyatt into their lives and not listening was bothersome. And how they both betrayed their principles, her especially was frustrating. Thanks for sharing.

Great

This author promotes Femdom agitprop in every story, making it simply feminist propaganda. Shame.

I made it through page 3, gave up on this author.

I feel like I wasted my time again with one of your stories. To bad you have not learned to be more realistic with your tales.MEN will not put up with shit you have your MCs go through.. Men do not get side tracked by pussy to bypass their convictions as easily as you write it. In fact more than likely for some revenge the husband would have taken the money offered with a smile and cut ties completely with Coby and everyone in her life.For a good writer you truly have not shown what you are capable of even though you read the comments...3 stars..

Before the end of page 4 Darren became as big a whore as his wife

Some of the comments show how little it's authors know true human nature. "No man would put up with this" really? Scenarios like this are played out in the real world everyday....this story deserves a higher rating, I'm giving it a five to bring it up, though I don't think the ratings are ever changed once it has been initially posted.

@Ezollin you're obviously the one who doesn't understand human nature. That scenario could never play out in the real world, it's illegal. And no spouse would ever put up with it man or woman. It's absurd. It's disrespectful to a degree that's unfathomable. Marriage is a vow of Fidelity, and she broke it to whore herself out. And he's just as bad for actually going along with it.

Human nature? Come the hell on. You're being utterly insane, or your moral compass is seriously out of line.

That being said I loved the story. I don't have to like the choices the characters made in order to find it a great tale. 5 Stars from me.