All Comments on 'Property Ch. 03'

Yeah, and the next story she comes in with a butcher knife from cooking his dinner while he's watching t.v. and slits his hillbilly throat. What this bullshit story needs is revenge!

Hope to see more of your writing soon!

Being a sub myself I enjoyed it very much. I can't wait to read more. Please write more.

As always...excellent ...

your writing is great...have read a few of your stories and with the dialogue you use it really captures the essence of the humiliation play and the dynamic between the characters (who are so well created)...hope you put more stories up soon, Laura :)xx

Couldn't read this, but I do love your writing style.

A great story. Please keep on writing.

I laughed at 4/16/04's comment.

I'm not that into BDSM myself (lol. the second chapter made me want to cry. she never has a good day!), but I always find these stories interesting. This one especially.

And did i forget to mention? My bad... i duly wish whoever girl you are talking about here...pisses on you... nd dump you... but wishes rarely comes true. Ryt?

that knows how to handle a sub. Nice story I wish there was more ;)

My favorite.