by historymajor
... to find something so different. Makes a nice change from the repetitive situations we find so often. Thanks and congratulations.
Thank you for being so different: erotic and so subtle. Liked the herstory side of it, as well. Keep going with intelligent and well written material.
...there is nothing I shall find more erotic!
Loved it--very arousing. One sentence of yours made me laugh "No slave girl would have so much weight, so great a blessing in fatness." Just struck me as funny.
Refreshing to see a creative, well told story. Excellent.
Satisfying on so many levels! I loved the very believable historical aspect, the wife's combination of intelligence, purpose and submission, the depiction of the king's shifting moods, and the final sentence, connecting this story to the lives of people just like me: married forever, exhausted yet still trying, and very quietly heroic. Thank you!