All Comments on 'Public Fun'

Jules

This is a great story, not just because it has photos, but because it has great dialogue, good strong lead in, wonderful sex and good characters. And above all I love your after story note - I too don't understand the men who read these stories and then leave abusive notes that betray their own uncertainties and fears. Why read them???

Thanks again

I believe you and husband are certainly entitled to do so. The story was highly erotic and the pictures were stimulating. Look forward to future postings.

Jules,

You gave a great response to the individual who had no business critizing you for writing your experiences on this type of story site. What the hell was he thinking! He must been ashamed of himself for coming to this site and reading for 2 weeks. Your story was great, well written and very well illustrated! I was really jealous of Sam, what I wouldn't have done to be in his shoes. Take care and please write more of your experiences.

The most incredibly erotic pics, and the story is well-written and exciting. First class in every way. Thank you.

What an erotic delight, made even more delightful with the simple black and white illustrations - perfect erotica! I certaily hope there is more to come from this talented mind and eye!

The pictures were spectacular! I love the voyeuristic nature. Sexy is an understatement! The story combined with the pics was pure perfection!

Loved your hot story and your pics.

Saml31@hotmail.com

your prose was clean and clear and the almost stark black and white photos titillating and lovely. So pleased I stumbled upon this story on the Top Lists! Here's hoping theres more to cum.

Thank you so much for your story. I thought it was beautifully and sensitively written and the photos certainly added to the story. I have recently joined Literotica and intend to submit something with accompanying photos soon. Thank you again

Anna

xxx

This story is exciting I love it..some how I live vicariously through you n I have experience such a thrill..to hell with ppl who think otherwise like I said though I love it!!!

Thank you so much for your delightfully intriguing stories. I thought this one was beautifully and sensitively written and the photos certainly added to the story. It reminds me of a story with my now deceased wife, slipping bread sticks in her pussy at a restaurant in Hawaii 20 years ago. That event and similar ones may become a book/novel someday.

I have recently joined Literotica after being a anonymous reader for a year, only so I can write you with a letter of thanks and admiration. I love the style of both of you and would love to start a relationship like yours. Recently widowed, your relationship is one I’d like to emulate as I look around at what I want. Please do continue with the photos that I gather are of you. They are so so hot, particularly knowing they are photos of you. Would love to hear more about the story behind the “story”, in other words the events that took place to stimulate the story put on Literotica. Thank you again, 
Lucky MM

My dick has not been hard in over 7 years due to prostate cancer but I felt blood flowing while reading and looking.. I wanted to lick you so bad I actually thought I might get hard. Thats the closest I've been to cumming in years.. gives me hope.. I am now going back to see and read all your stuff.. maybe another look at you just might do it.

Great story, backed up with pleasing black and white photos

Looking forward to further stories and more revealing photos

Keep writing please and ignore the illogical comments. There is no need to be rude.

You are right in saying a woman can be sexy and more to the point has that freedom.

Great story and the two photos are hot. I wanted to lick the woman's nipples and slit on my computer screen. One of my fantasies is to be more adventurous in public like the woman in this story. Thank you!

Great story!!! Great pictures!!! I like

The story is hot!

The pics are beautiful, erotic, and in my book they are even poetic!

❤💚❤💚❤+ (5+)

The pics on the fiography page is very erotic!

The story itself is very erotic: ★★★★★ (5)!

The pics are excellent and are the icing on the cake: ★★★★★ (5.0 = 100%)!

I am copy-pasting an older comment, which I fully agree with.

"raconteuse - over 10 years ago

Wonderful!!

The most incredibly erotic pics, and the story is well-written and exciting. First class in every way. Thank you."

Every wife should have a boyfriend on the side to fuck her, my wife had a boyfriend or 2 all the time for 30 years, fucking and Cumming in her unprotected married pussy. Only got pregnant a few times.

Just had to write and tell you I love your stories wish I had a wife as open as you or n

Knew friends like the two of you

Good story, hot photos, gorgeous model, if it works for you keep going, if it's consensual and no-one gets hurt or humiliated, fine.

Wow! You're very good with words. Very, very good. Looking forward to reading other stories by you, luv!

Wow Simply Wow!!!

Fuck the story,,,,, Well said!

Very hot! Loved it!