All Comments on 'Public Pleasure at Amusement Park'

Mmmm... SO HOT. Love your style, imagination, and everything about his story. Exhibitionism gone wrong (right) is sooo sexy.

Unfortunately I was unable to finish the story due to the glaring spelling and grammatical errors. Also, it seems you left a note about the water park being closed before your character even gets there. I would suggest finding someone to edit your stories prior to publishing them. The idea is great, but as I said, the spelling errors are difficult to overlook. Really basic things like 'starting' instead of 'staring' and 'accidently' instead of 'accidentally'.

Don't mean to offend. Just hoping to offer some constructive criticism with the hopes that your stories get the visibility they deserve.

Amazing story, so fun and hot! Thank you!

My wife snd I are memebers at Camping Adam and Eve, its an adults only nudist camp near Drummondvile, Quebec. You would love the place and could show yourself as you wish. Lots of public sex in the trails. I masturbated my wife by the pool while every one was around watched last summer

great and hot story! Thank you!