All Comments on 'Pulses Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

A bit brief, but fun. Good job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Lets get mom in on the actions!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Fantastic premise, I would enjoy more descriptives about her as she orgasms. Her ragged breathing, her feet clenching and releasing, the sounds she makes, and things like that... You are far more talented a storyteller than I, and I look forward to seeing where you take this tale.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I liked it. Waiting for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

wrong catagory as Sci-Fi & Fantasy Sex takes precedence over incest in this case.

202GE202GEover 1 year ago

Great little tale.

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