All Comments on 'Pump Up The Fam Pt. 04'

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James_DuncanJames_Duncan3 months ago

Completely nuts, but in a good way :)

WhitewaterbumWhitewaterbum3 months ago

One of the most unbelievable stories I’ve read but loved every minute of it. A short follow-up stoty about the babies say twenty years down the line. Would they all produce girls on first round and on second 3 girls and an alpha male to help Daddy?

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Haha, I love this story. So whacky in its concept and themes, but you’ve made it work, with a solid helping of plot to drive the sex scenes too. Great work!

Esperx27Esperx273 months ago

This was a cool idea

MenoetesMenoetes3 months agoAuthor

I'm really happy you all liked it. Thanks for commenting!

WrangelFitzWrangelFitzabout 1 month ago

This was an incredible ride from start to finish. Glad to see you keep churning out the hits!

LechemanLechemanabout 1 month ago

Totally awesome fun, loved it.

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Oh hi, I didn't see you there... Hailing from the Asphodel Meadows of Hades, Menoetes writes silly smutty stories to entertain and titillate. You'll find all manner of delectable themes in his sordid tales. These include mesmeric Mind Control, hot Harems, tantalizing Taboos...

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