All Comments on 'Punishing a Cheater Pt. 01'

"My friend and I (punished)..." If you want this girl to have been to college, try and get basic grammar and punctuation right. You have commas where there should be periods and commas where there should be none.

You need more dialogue. Instead of telling us what was said. "Kai" doesn't speak a word. This is just overall poorly written, e.g. you have "dildo in his ass" twice in a row. This is just a scene and doesn't make much sense.

Grammar notwithstanding a very good revenge story but will Kai reform?