All Comments on 'Puppy Love Ch. 03'

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MarcLuciFerMarcLuciFer12 months ago

Oh PR, thanks for this chapter. I don't know who I'm happier for, Jack or Olive and Theo. Or maybe me after reading this pleasant surprise. Can't wait for #4.

dnsontndnsontn12 months ago

Feeling a little too good to be true. Not that you’d write in any drama…

carmelcookeecarmelcookee12 months ago

It's all coming together nicely. I'm routing for love. Jack deserves to play out all the naughty fantasy with Luke and find happiness. Last chapter was a WTF moment. This is a hmmmm, interesting... IN A GOOD WAY... waiting on the next chapter. Somehow, I think the sex is going to be mindblowing for both both I'll wait and see

readerguy9976readerguy997612 months ago

aaaaagh the very last sentence! punch me in the kidneys why don't ya. but I'm glad they are where they are right now.

Exluke1Exluke112 months ago

Well I bet Jack is glad he kissed Luke now! Luke’s attitude and honesty is refreshing as he goes through their talk on his deck to his feelings all day at the beach and finally to what happens tomorrow. Jack is not the only one falling fast and I can’t wait for the next chapter.

EdeyEdey9 months ago

I loved how you pulled it off, great story 🥰

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